Thursday, October 28, 2010

Three Word Wed -- fragile, rampant, tremor

THE TREMOR

His was a fragile ego,
the kind you tiptoed around
hoping not to squeak a floorboard
and wake the sleeping giant.

Hers was a living tremor,
the kind of rampant quake that
rattles your heart deep in your chest
and never lets you sleep.
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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousThu Oct 28, 11:40:00 AM PDT

    Loved your take on the three words - a his and hers poem :) - and it all hangs together so well. Well done!

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  2. gautami tripathyThu Oct 28, 05:21:00 PM PDT

    Like the differences..



    corners

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  3. AnonymousFri Oct 29, 09:17:00 AM PDT

    Clever use of the words!

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  4. Kimiko Love MartinezFri Oct 29, 09:59:00 AM PDT

    Thanks all!

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  5. Ramesh SoodSat Oct 30, 07:23:00 AM PDT

    Very well said that! Fragile ego and Living tremor.. sure the relationship would linger longer than one can imagine..

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