Thursday, October 28, 2010

Three Word Wed -- fragile, rampant, tremor

THE TREMOR

His was a fragile ego,
the kind you tiptoed around
hoping not to squeak a floorboard
and wake the sleeping giant.

Hers was a living tremor,
the kind of rampant quake that
rattles your heart deep in your chest
and never lets you sleep.

5 comments:

  1. Loved your take on the three words - a his and hers poem :) - and it all hangs together so well. Well done!

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  2. Very well said that! Fragile ego and Living tremor.. sure the relationship would linger longer than one can imagine..

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