Thursday, May 26, 2011

We lay

We lay in
a jumbled heap
naked and grinning


Three Word Wednesday - grin, jumble, naked

7 comments:

  1. Nine words and you have captured everything eloquently.

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  2. You literally could not say it better than that! Brilliantly brief.

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  3. Thank you both.
    The words for this week's prompt practically wrote themselves. Glad you like the simplicity of this imagery.

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  4. Ooooo good one! Makes me feel like grinning too.

    My three words entry is awfully long, but I hope you'll read it anyway.

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  5. Kimiko, every time I think you've done your best haiku, especially with the 3WW prompt, you come up with a charmer like this. I loved it. I found two on the prompt:
    http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/05/31/twofer-limerick-and-love-poem/

    Peace, Amy

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  6. You say the nicest things, Amy.
    I think just a few words can go a lot further when so many people can identify with the image ... which apparently we all do. ;)

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