Saturday, April 14, 2012

Clear direction

We climbed the mountain
for the journey to the top.
We sailed the ocean
to feel the wind and salt air.
We left the compass at home.

WD Poetic Form Challenge: Tanka


  1. Congratulations! This was wonderful! Woo-ee!

  2. Kimiko, sorry I have not been commenting lately. There was a huge dustup at WordPress...

    This is a lovely poem. I'm not good with forms, but the meaning is so clear. This is how I generally live my life, because I go where the wind takes me. Glad to hear you do, too. Love, Amy



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