Thursday, October 2, 2014

Moving on

This week's prompt on Poetry Jam was "magic." And there's nothing I find more magic than the human capacity to love, forgive, hope, endure ...
















MOVING ON

We fight
we yell
we cry
we cling
we despair
we beg
we regret
we ache
we wonder
we release
we remember
we love

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Poetry Jam: magic

20 comments:

  1. We are endowed with immense power to make each moment magical, isn't it?..I really like the spontaneous flow here........nice to meet you Kimiko...welcome to Poetry Jam :)

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  2. Yes, there is indeed something magic in the way we work with relationships and keep them going and growing. I liked the form too!

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    1. Thanks, Gabriella! Not a sort of form I normally use (partial to lunes and tankas and haikus), but seemed to fit the feel of this sort of emotion.

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  3. Ah, it seems that all relationships develop their patterns, don't they? So many different kinds of love.

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  4. smiles...ha...relationships are always fluid like that...as long as we keep moving on...that is what is important...

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    1. Sink or swim. And do what it takes to keep each other afloat ... unless the other person is dragging you down. Then maybe it's time to jump ship. ;-)

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    1. Humanity is magic. And all our splendid free will and magic emotions.

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  6. Really nice twist on the prompt, and so true!

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    1. Thanks, Laurie! Good to see you! Been awhile. ;-)

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  7. Good direction on the prompt! Thanks for sharing.

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  8. Yes, we do all those things. What a unique take on the prompt! Nice work!

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  9. Powerful emotion convey brilliantly, really well done.

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