The smell of burning leaves
outside couldn't overpower
the smell of burning croissants
wafting from the downstairs kitchen,
the chaos of
smoke detectors beeping incessantly loud,
while Mom, who never cooks,
grabbed a towel
from the counter to fan
the smoke from the charred
pastries out through
an open window to intermingle
with the smoldering pile of
red and yellow
leaves in our long driveway
behind Dad's old yellow VW
bug and beside
the spot my sister and
I liked to play hopscotch,
retreating to the
outdoors while my brother butchered
Mozart practicing his oboe every
night, our go-to
punching bag for sibling barbs
The beeping stopped but the
smell of smoke
lingered and I wondered if
the rest of dinner was
lost. If we'd
still be eating roast beef
or if Dad would call
Chen's for wonton
soup and takeout for five
--
Creative Bloomings prompt 168 - mix-and-match muse
Monday, September 29, 2014
The fall
Labels:
autumn,
creativebloomings,
dinnertime,
fall,
family,
smoke,
vw
Tuesday, September 16, 2014
Unpacking the trunk
You look at me and
see a gray body bloated with memories,
wrinkled by the worries of
a life too well remembered
You see no beauty in
the bulk of my weight, hips that
have carried our children into
this dusty, drought-weary world
little ones who gaze at
their mother through elephant-thick eyelashes and
see only the fierce matronly
love beneath the rough hide
--
Creative Bloomings prompt #166 - animal house
see a gray body bloated with memories,
wrinkled by the worries of
a life too well remembered
You see no beauty in
the bulk of my weight, hips that
have carried our children into
this dusty, drought-weary world
little ones who gaze at
their mother through elephant-thick eyelashes and
see only the fierce matronly
love beneath the rough hide
--
Creative Bloomings prompt #166 - animal house
Labels:
a mother's love,
creativebloomings,
elephant,
love,
motherhood,
parenting
Wednesday, July 9, 2014
Man of the house
He was a desperate man,
a child really,
broken and sad, left to
raise three children when he
could barely take
care of himself
She was a broken child
desperate for a
man to care for her
but always left carrying
the burden of
caring for herself
--
Labels:
daddy issues,
growing up,
impossible places,
neglect,
poetryjam
Tuesday, July 8, 2014
Always tomorrow
"I love you in the future," he
says, believing his own words as
he kisses me on the forehead
like a real lover would
--
Creative Bloomings Micro Poetry - Another Short Japanese Form?
says, believing his own words as
he kisses me on the forehead
like a real lover would
--
Creative Bloomings Micro Poetry - Another Short Japanese Form?
Labels:
chemistry,
creativebloomings,
future,
love,
lovers,
micropoetry,
poeticforms,
ryuka
Nachtmusik
A nylon tent
can keep out
skunks and bears
can keep in
the warmth of
two intermingled bodies
let in the
smell of wet
pine and trap
the smell of
damp socks and
musty sleeping bags
but our flimsy
fabric walls cannot
keep out the
surrounding symphony of
crickets and creeks
that ring in
our ears as
we fall asleep
to at night
--
July PAD Day 5 - did you hear that?
can keep out
skunks and bears
can keep in
the warmth of
two intermingled bodies
let in the
smell of wet
pine and trap
the smell of
damp socks and
musty sleeping bags
but our flimsy
fabric walls cannot
keep out the
surrounding symphony of
crickets and creeks
that ring in
our ears as
we fall asleep
to at night
--
July PAD Day 5 - did you hear that?
Labels:
campgranada,
camping,
crickets,
did you hear that,
julypad,
Nachtmusik,
nature sounds,
night,
noises,
sound
Monday, July 7, 2014
Man on the moon
Does the man
on the moon
cry for us?
Does he hide
his phosphorescent face
behind stiff hands
and wonder why
he must always
light the way?
Does he face
our blue world
and lean away
wishing he could
hide from our
stiff smiles and
wandering eyes, wishing
man could see
his own light?
--
July PAD Day 4 - night lights over the lake
on the moon
cry for us?
Does he hide
his phosphorescent face
behind stiff hands
and wonder why
he must always
light the way?
Does he face
our blue world
and lean away
wishing he could
hide from our
stiff smiles and
wandering eyes, wishing
man could see
his own light?
--
July PAD Day 4 - night lights over the lake
Labels:
campgranada,
cry,
crying,
inner light,
julypad,
light,
man on the moon,
mankind,
moon,
night,
night sky,
sky
Greased up
Inspired by the first "summer" song that came to mind ... "Summer Lovin'" from Grease
The scent of sunscreen
always makes me think
of bikinis and boys
the salty sea air
and wet swimsuits
a lubricant for lust
as eyes scan the
sand for some sexy
smile full of promise
--
July PAD Day 3 - in the summertime (music)
The scent of sunscreen
always makes me think
of bikinis and boys
the salty sea air
and wet swimsuits
a lubricant for lust
as eyes scan the
sand for some sexy
smile full of promise
--
July PAD Day 3 - in the summertime (music)
Labels:
beach,
bikini,
campgranada,
grease,
julypad,
love,
lust,
sand,
summer lovin,
teenagers
A step in the right direction?
I am too young
to know that this
land is ancient
maybe even sacred
and that my footsteps
stir my ancestor's souls
beneath me
I am too blind
to see that this
river has wound its
way through the lives
of my mother's mother's mothers,
women and children
who lived off this land
and built this world
beneath me
I am too wise
not to understand that these
footsteps I'm making
are miles from
my ancestors' paths
and this land will crumble
beneath me
--
July PAD Day 2 - discovery / bop form
to know that this
land is ancient
maybe even sacred
and that my footsteps
stir my ancestor's souls
beneath me
I am too blind
to see that this
river has wound its
way through the lives
of my mother's mother's mothers,
women and children
who lived off this land
and built this world
beneath me
I am too wise
not to understand that these
footsteps I'm making
are miles from
my ancestors' paths
and this land will crumble
beneath me
--
July PAD Day 2 - discovery / bop form
Sunday, July 6, 2014
April PAD results ...
Super proud poem mom for a very short poem of mine (and when are they not short?), When Smoke Gets in Your Eyes, making the Top 10 list of this year's April PAD for Day 3.
It's my first time participating in a couple of years, so it's definitely an honor to make the cut ... again!
As Robert says:
The poets who’ve made those top 10 lists should be extremely happy with their work. I read through more than 21,000 comments and 5,600 pages of poems and encouragement.
Only 300 of those made the top 10 lists–or less than 1.4%. In other words, around 1 poem for every 100 comments. That’s crazy!
To be named winner, of course, is barely one-tenth of one percent.
It's my first time participating in a couple of years, so it's definitely an honor to make the cut ... again!
As Robert says:
The poets who’ve made those top 10 lists should be extremely happy with their work. I read through more than 21,000 comments and 5,600 pages of poems and encouragement.
Only 300 of those made the top 10 lists–or less than 1.4%. In other words, around 1 poem for every 100 comments. That’s crazy!
To be named winner, of course, is barely one-tenth of one percent.
Pismo Beach
Inspired by summer family vacations spent in the sand dunes of Pismo Beach and Big Sur
We spent afternoons
rolling down mountains of sand
laughing as we
tumbled like logs,
all limbs and heavy trunks,
crashing our way
through the salty
air and the slow, thick
stick of vacation
flying through timelessness
ever-closer toward the cold embrace
of the Pacific
and the long
wet ride home
--
July PAD Day 1 - camping memory
We spent afternoons
rolling down mountains of sand
laughing as we
tumbled like logs,
all limbs and heavy trunks,
crashing our way
through the salty
air and the slow, thick
stick of vacation
flying through timelessness
ever-closer toward the cold embrace
of the Pacific
and the long
wet ride home
--
July PAD Day 1 - camping memory
Labels:
beach,
big sur,
campgranada,
camping,
creativebloomings,
dunes,
family vacation,
julypad,
ocean,
pacific,
pismo,
pismo beach,
sand dunes,
vacation
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