We climbed the mountain
for the journey to the top.
We sailed the ocean
to feel the wind and salt air.
We left the compass at home.
WD Poetic Form Challenge: Tanka
Saturday, April 14, 2012
Clear direction
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Congratulations! This was wonderful! Woo-ee!
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ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely poem. I'm not good with forms, but the meaning is so clear. This is how I generally live my life, because I go where the wind takes me. Glad to hear you do, too. Love, Amy